Persuasive writing.

Persuasive writing about swimming pool.

Friday 25th September 2015.

Today I will be talking about if we should get a big swimming pool.We should have a bigger swimming pool so our whole class will have room to fit inside the pool and it will be to take other swimming lessons.They should bust our old swimming pool including the changing room’s.

After the builders bust down our swimming pool and changing room’s down we can start to build a new one that will be better than our old one.Our pool should be enough bigger for our class to have more space and the changing rooms should have showers in it.The builders should make it deep for us to swim in and there should be a small pool for the junior kids to swim in and for the senior pool we should have a diving board for us to jump off.

But first we should have permission to make a new pool for our school.But if we don’t have permission to build a new pool than we will keep it to the old one.

Argument writing about the sea

Rubbish does not belong in the sea

When people are at the beach and eat their food, they should not throw their rubbish in the sea because when the tides come in it takes the rubbish to the sea.

Fishing boats should make sure they take big bins for their rubbish and not throw their rubbish into the sea. They should bring their rubbish back with them to land.

There should be fines for people who are caught throwing their rubbish around because most of the rubbish flows to the drains when it rains and it ends up in the sea. 

The rubbish which is washed to sea ends up killing the sea life. This is not good because if the sea life keep dying then the sea will no longer be a nice place for the environment.