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Friday 14 August 2015

Red-Pool and Dead-Pool.

Red Pool is Dead Pool’s brother.One time Red Pool and Dead Pool lived together in there own rich pool house.They both had the same powers but sometimes they can level up there powers and unlock some strong one’s for them.One time Red Pool was training his powers in a training lab underground.Dead Pool was having a nap in his bed well Red Pool was training.He trained so hard he went to a new level and unlocked a new ability for him and his new power was invisibility.


After he was training he went upstairs to Deadpool.Well Dead pool was sleeping Red Pool snuck up on him and scared him with his new ability When Dead Pool woke up he said,’’ how did you get a new ability?’’
Red Pool said he trained so hard.


So Deadpool went down to the training lab and trained for five hours.After he trained for five hours he waited till he would unlock a new ability.He was waiting till he unlocked a new ability but nothing came so he waited for the next day.After the next day he still never got his ability but after woulds in the afternoon he went back down to the lab to train one more time and after he trained down in the training lab he got his new ability and his new ability was force field.


After that he went upstairs to Red Pool and he showed him his new ability.When he showed his new ability Red Pool got jealous because that was his dream power to get.
The End

3 comments:

Amy Tofa said...

This is a very interesting narrative Justin. Imagine making the cartoons for this. Do you think you can create cartoon characters which will match Red Pool and Deadpool?

Samuel Touré said...

I like this story Justin, I can imagine the characters and the way you wrote the story. Good Job!

Samuel Touré said...

I like this story Justin, I can imagine the characters and the way you wrote the story. Good Job!

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