Persuasive writing.

Persuasive writing about swimming pool.

Friday 25th September 2015.

Today I will be talking about if we should get a big swimming pool.We should have a bigger swimming pool so our whole class will have room to fit inside the pool and it will be to take other swimming lessons.They should bust our old swimming pool including the changing room’s.

After the builders bust down our swimming pool and changing room’s down we can start to build a new one that will be better than our old one.Our pool should be enough bigger for our class to have more space and the changing rooms should have showers in it.The builders should make it deep for us to swim in and there should be a small pool for the junior kids to swim in and for the senior pool we should have a diving board for us to jump off.

But first we should have permission to make a new pool for our school.But if we don’t have permission to build a new pool than we will keep it to the old one.